Discursive essay about an article

I'm going to write about Coca Cola's sugar problem.The worldwide known brand is talking about their sugar problem.The third of the Americans are overweighted or obesity.The company had admitted that they maybe put too much sugar in the drink (9 spoons of sugar).They claim that Coca Cola is the problem of the American diet and the British diet too.The two-third of the American people believe that if they eat more food and drink Coca Cola they will burn more calories.The scientsits showed that consuming large amount of sugar is more bad  than to eat fat.Over the last decades the consuming of large amount of sugar is increasing rise of the diseases like diabetes, heart problems, cancer.the scientists also discovered the facet that in 1822 the consuming of sugar were less than today.Adults were consuming one can of Coca Cola in five days.Nowadays this number is one can every seven hours.One third of the people are obese.The British people are trying to minimize sugar consume.Coca Cola is almost dangerous like consuming alcohol or cigarettes.Robert Lustig and his fellow scientists said that it is time the world takes attention to sugar because it can be a very bad thing.